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Bella Smith ⭐'s avatar

Thank you for giving voice to these important questions and for sharing your honest wrestling with them nj❤️❤️

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NJ Simat 🤍's avatar

Well this is soul-warming. Thank you for responding, what a lovely comment.

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Josey Lee's avatar

I know my opinion might not reflect the majority, but I would rather read a personal “story” in a poem or collection rather than have the writer try to make it universal for me. I want the writer to give it to me as it was for them: intense, messy, and unique. Let me discover my experience in their story. I want to feel like I’m being allowed to read private writing. 😹

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NJ Simat 🤍's avatar

Well put, and for the most part I agree. I do however enjoy light rhyme, meter and musicality. I also enjoy double meaning and vivid imagery more than narration. I want to be surprised and impressed with your wordship.

like Elise Powers and Ocean Voung but also moved by your experience like Ada Limon.

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Josey Lee's avatar

I love those things, too. I just don’t want it made “artificially pretty” for me. Yes, give me all the poetic fun while you’re baring your soul! 🩵

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NJ Simat 🤍's avatar

agreed. When the speaker or the poet find something genuinely captivating it comes through. I don’t like flowery language either but I love defamiarization, fresh language, and unique perspectives.

I also don’t mind something bordering didactic, as long as it’s presented as an idea/view and not law.

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