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NJ Simat 🤍's avatar

Here is the original poem from before edits (b/c I think its neat to see/share the polishing):

Her storm arrives on time,

stealing both our light,

centering its heft

between my eyes.

Somewhere, lightning snaps

a small birch branch

seemingly all too happy to fall,

to loose itself into earth once more.

Then, a fury of cardinals

and their rotten berries, discarded

drip dropping into nothing,

into nothing new.

The power returns

But I keep the lights off.

Azure Jo Storm | poet's avatar

Absolutely memorizing. I love poems with storms being used I'm happy I came across this!

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